Thursday, April 15, 2010

butt

cigarette butt at my feet
not mine
the street-sweeper's scowl

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Blogger PhantomPunch said...

I really, really like this one. I love what it doesn't say, and lets the reader imagine. This is what I aspire to do. Pleased to have found your work and I look forward to reading more.

6:23 PM  
Blogger High IQ 2010 said...

Greetings Eric!

Would you like to send us a football haiku for the Haiku World Cup?

http://haikuworldcup.blogspot.com

iq.high2010@gmail.com

FHWC Team

2:11 PM  

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