Wednesday, January 04, 2006

hoping for magic
a stolen calf heart
inside the snowman


Blogger david giacalone said...

The folks at LSSU just put "surreal" on its Banished Word List, but this haiku is surely surreally surreal. I don't want to be there when the snowman melts.

8:00 AM  
Blogger mattm said...

Surreal indeed, and sublime too

2:51 PM  
Blogger Eric said...

real. not surreal. does it resemble the childhood of the mountain-man in the movie Deliverance? welcome to my world . . . :)

5:10 PM  

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