haiku . . . senryu . . . tanka
posted by Eric at 7:20 AM
powerful.
black ice --Thanksgiving without grandpa's laugh
Eric,I like the ambiguity in this - is she in the grave or visiting her husband's grave ? This makes one reflect on the varieties of loneliness. Well done.bw,DenisHaiku Unchained
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powerful.
black ice --
Thanksgiving
without grandpa's laugh
Eric,
I like the ambiguity in this - is she in the grave or visiting her husband's grave ?
This makes one reflect on the varieties of loneliness. Well done.
bw,
Denis
Haiku Unchained
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